ebi: more quotes/references, especially at the start, link to what you're writing about. More analysis of the actual text less WC at the end.
www: A thorough understanding of the movie and some analysis of the scene.
ebi: Need to put in more theorists and debates to link and provide evidence with every sentence.
www: extensive talk on the representation youth. Relevant wider context.
ebi: could utilise Ideology and audience slightly more.
www: discuss representations of social backgrounds weel
ebi: use more media terminology when discussing your points.
www: many points of moral panic to support your point. critical debate - a lot of stereotypes and representation.
ebi: add theories to support analysis e.g. dyer, Medhurst etc.
www: good use of gender and ethnicity theory
ebi: you use audience and genre for Offender. what effects does the rioting scenes have on the audience? Also, try talk about marxism and hegemony.
www: the formatting of the footnote were correct
ebi: if you used more range of books
www: good introduction should start with a better quote.
ebi: need to d one more critical autonomy, didn't see much.
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